Can your work survive a tough cycle?
Thursday, March 7, 2013 at 11:32AM 
For years I’ve worn the same pale blue Gore-Tex raincoat, a wardrobe essential in the BC rainforest. Recently it started to look worse for wear, kind of grubby. I didn’t like the replacement options so, with nothing to lose, I threw it into the washing machine one last time. I selected a heavy duty, warm temperature wash (instead of the usual regular and cool). Result: a coat that looks bright and new again.
Word count: 264 Reading time: 1 minute
That’s very much like writing. When I have a piece (one particular novel comes to mind) that feels shop-worn and tired, I need to put it through a course of no-holds-barred rewriting. I need to stop treating it as a fragile work that will fall apart if I’m too rough with it. Ernest Hemingway rewrote the end of Farewell to Arms 39 times before he got the words right. Based on that standard, my weary novel needs a few more revisions.
Kurt Loder urges writers to give their work stronger treatment: “The most important thing you can to is learn to edit yourself. Then go back and rewrite.” I blog on this often because I don’t want to lose sight of the fact that writing, like any meaningful endeavour, is full of repetition and hard work until it’s finally right. We have to turn up the heat and pummel it hard if we’re going to produce something that is shiny and appealing.
What is your old blue raincoat? Is there a neglected manuscript sitting on your shelf? Would throwing it into a heavy duty cycle bring it back to life?
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Photo by: Elana Elisseeva
Reader Comments (4)
Oh, my. My WIP is my pale blue raincoat and it's in need of a major scrub. Industrial machine, heavy duty setting, lots of soap. And a good shaking-out when it's finished. Maybe, just maybe, it will become presentable.
Happy revision, Judy!
Usually I love the rewriting process but the novel I'm working on right now has been recast several times, and never to my satisfaction. I think I'm finally getting a grounded sense of where it was headed all along.
It just needs a little starch.
Maggie
When I finish my WIP (which will be soon), I am certain it will need a thorough scrub, maybe even a hose, before I toss it in the machine. Thanks, yet again, Maggie, for the great tip on writing.
Thank you for dropping by, Allison.
I'm looking forward to reading the whole adventure, start to finish.